I made a Lego Space Shuttle to base my writing piece on. I called my piece
of writing 'My Trip To Space'. I needed to include onomatopoeia and similes.
Here is my writing. I hope you enjoy it.
Kia ora Zavier I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing. You have chosen your words well and I felt that I was zooming into space too! I wonder why you chose to name your space shuttle BOB65?
Hi Zavier, what a fantastic piece of writing! I see your Mum in the photo, was she your co-pilot in Bob 65?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Zavier
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your piece of writing. You have chosen your words well and I felt that I was zooming into space too!
I wonder why you chose to name your space shuttle BOB65?